Ki Ora everyone. Today I would like to tell you about a poetry challenge by our cyber smart teacher Mr Marggets I think it's spelled. Basically he made a site called poetry slam. Where we share our poems. First we had to make a poem any type. I did my sea poem. Next we had to screen castify our poem with us saying our poem. Then we had to blog our screen castify which is the thing your reading right now. Hope you like it! >
Tino pai Jeremiah. I love how your poem is full of facts. I feel like I've learnt a lot by listening to it. Hopefully we don't have any spiky toothed sharks too close to New Zealand! What is your favourite sea creature?
ReplyDeleteMy favourite Sea creature is an Octopus but if I had to choose 1 that's not in poem it would be a turtle because its my favourite colour green. Thanks for adding me on the podcast! and also thanks for commenting on my blog post. Until next time, blog ya later!
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DeleteTalofa lava,my name is amanuel i love that you did a sea poem it reminds me of making fact posters about sea animals. what is your favourite sea animal?
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Amanuel, my favourite animal is an octopus because it is one of my favourite colours and cause it has 8 arms (Or legs) Do you have a favourite Sea animal? Thanks for commenting on my blog post, blog ya later!
DeleteTalofa lava,my name is rodney from wesley primary shcool. i love your poem because you were talking about sea animals such as a whale
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Deletehi nice blog post
ReplyDeleteHello carlost did you have any questions about this blog post? Something I could improve on?? Thanks for commenting on my blog post, blog ya later!
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DeleteKia ora my name is George. I really like this poem about sea creatures, I can tell your confident on your spelling . what was your favourite part when you created the poem? and what do you you think you have to work on?.
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I think I'll have to work on how I spoke (It's always what I have to work on) because I feel like I could speak better. I'm not the only one who did this though. Make sure to check out other people too! Thanks for commenting, blog ya later!
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ReplyDelete-Kon'nichiwa Jermiah, I'm Hiwatt from Owairaka District School. I like your blog post whats your favourite sea animal?
ReplyDeleteIf I had to choose my favourite animal I would choose an octopus because of it's color and how it has 8 arms. Thanks for commenting on my blog post. Blog ya later!
DeleteHi Jeremiah! I am Diyani from Owairaka District school.
ReplyDeleteAwesome work you have done! Must have been really hard to work on.
Maybe next time you could add more adverbs and amazing tittle. :)
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It wasn't that hard to work on. Thanks for the feedback, if I ever do this again I'll make sure I'll do that. Anyway thanks for giving me your feedback, blog ya later!
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ReplyDeleteI really like the quirky little touches through out the blog post. This quite reminds my about last year when we made poems about kindness. Maybe next time you can add your opinion on your post and labels so it can be found easier.
Blog you later, Caleb
Hi Caleb, I thought this would be a very embarrassing blog post because of how I spoke. But looking that I have 11 respectful comments. I have more confident. Thanks for commenting on my blog post! Blog ya later!
DeleteHi Jeremiah i liked your Sea Poem because you added lots of descriptive words . It reminded me about when i made 3 Haiku poems also how long did it take you to finish the poem.
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Rayhan, It took me about 15 minutes to make the poem and 5 minutes to screen castify it, would it be ok if you blogged about your haiku's it would be lovely to see it! anyway thanks for commenting on my blog! have a great day or night and blog ya later!
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Talofa lava Rayhan, It took me about 15 minutes to make the poem and 5 minutes to screen castify it, would it be ok if you blogged about your haiku's it would be lovely to see it! anyway thanks for commenting on my blog! have a great day or night and blog ya later! and sorry I put myself as Unknown
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Jeremiah. Kahvel here from Owairaka disrict primary school and I really like your sea poem about sea animals and I wonder why you would pee your pants when you see a shark but I mean I would be really scared if I was just swimming in the ocean and then out of nowhere I see a shark I get that but I wouldn't pee my pants.
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