Thursday, 15 August 2019

improving blog comments

Hi everyone in cybersmart today we were fixing up blog comments on peoples blogs so First we went on someones blog and found a blog comment that  we could fix up then we took a screenshot. we went to a google drawing and put it on the drawing then there was a box where we could put our improved comment on  then we put on our blog I hope you like it


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  1. Mrs McLellan21 August 2019 at 21:09

    Hi Jeremiah. You've certainly improved the feedback Jesse could have given Dani. I can see you have made comments that are positive, thoughtful and helpful, connecting your experiences of tasty KFC and pizza. As you look at what you have published on your blog today, what could you improve next time you post?

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